For a taste of some real writing, here's an excerpt from one of my all-time favorites. Nobody did it better than Papa Hemingway!
"He looked at her face between him and the fire. She was leaning back in the chair and the firelight shone on her pleasantly lined face and he could see that she was sleepy. He heard the hyena make a noise just outside the range of the fire.
'Do you think you will be able to sleep?’
'Pretty sure. Why don't you turn in?'
'I like to sit here with you.’
'Do you feel anything strange?' he asked her.
'No. Just a little sleepy.'
'I do,' he said.
He had just felt death come by again.
'You know the only thing I've never lost is curiosity’ he said to her.
'You've never lost anything. You're the most complete man I've ever known.'
'Christ’ he said. 'How little a woman knows. What is that? Your intuition?'
Because, just then, death had come and rested it’s head on the foot of the cot and he could smell its breath.
'Never believe any of that about a scythe and a skull,' he told her. 'It can be two bicycle policemen as easily or be a bird. Or it can have a wide snout like a hyena.'
It had moved up on him now, but it had no shape any more. It simply occupied space.
'Tell it to go away.'
It did not go away but moved a little closer.
'You've got a hell of a breath’ he told it. 'You stinking bastard.'
It moved up closer to him still and now he could not speak to it, and when it saw he could not speak it came a little closer, and now he tried to send it away without speaking, but it moved in on him so its weight was all upon his chest, and while it crouched there and he could not move, or speak, he heard the woman say, 'Bwana is asleep now. Take the cot up very gently and carry it into the tent'.
He could not speak to tell her to make it go away and it crouched now, heavier so he could not breathe. And then, while they lifted the cot, suddenly it was all right and the weight went from his chest.
It was morning and had been morning for some time and he heard the plane. They began to climb and they were going to the East it seemed, and then it darkened and they were in a storm, the rain so thick it seemed like flying through a water-fall, and then they were out and Compie turned his head and grinned and pointed and there, ahead, all he could see, as wide as all the world, great, high, and unbelievably white in the sun, was the square top of Kilimanjaro. And then he knew that there was where he was going.
Just then the hyena stopped whimpering in the night and started to make a strange, human, almost crying sound. The woman heard it and stirred uneasily. She did not wake. Then the noise the hyena made was so loud she woke and for a moment she did not know where she was and she was very afraid. Then she took the flashlight and shone it on the other cot that they had carried in after Harry had gone to sleep. She could see his bulk under the mosquito bar but somehow he had gotten his leg out and it hung down alongside the cot. The dressings had all come down and she could not look at it.
'Molo,' she called. 'Molo! Molo!'
Then she said, 'Harry, Harry!' Then her voice rising, 'Harry! Please, Oh Harry!
There was no answer and she could not hear him breathing.